Right now I've completed the pencils for chapter one (7 pages), currently inking page two.
Below are two versions of the 4th panel on page 5.
here's the setup: Despite the warning from a certain cheerleader, some dude is about to make the mistake of thinking the coast is clear and walk out into the open and stare into the gaping maw of a T Rex, with partially chewed up human parts still visible between its teeth. Meanwhile you may notice a robot flying overhead. Version One:
and version Two:
I'm leaning towards version two. Better, more exciting view of our cheerleader heroine. A little more ambitious maybe than I can actually pull off, but I'm trying to go with the feeling that whenever the action kicks in (which should be almost always) it looks like the "camera man" is off balance and doesn't quite get everything in the shot. Any thoughts, let me know.
Also this week I bring you another version of my rough pencils (lets face it, all my pencils are pretty rough) for the new cover image. Bigger and more details filled in. I improved the dinosaur in the foreground a little. Enjoy.