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Thursday, 28 June 2012
Issue one structure

Act One. Zombies unleashed as a prelude to shitstorm attack

Act two. Shit storm shows up

Act three     Robots attack chaos ensues

Theres a brief intro and conclusion. Everything should support this story or the overall theme which is that they are doing this for the kids and their future.   

Posted by frankandjane at 3:19 PM EDT
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Friday, 29 June 2012 - 12:09 PM EDT

Name: franktic
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This story arc is certainly unique...again I'll state that this may be too much for an intro issue.  I'll email a quick chart I created for how this current arc short...I think a whole re-write is needed.  This is not a first issue.  Please let me know if comic books flow this way, but all stories must follow patterns or readers get turned off quickly.  We're deeply invested, but it may be a "forest for the trees" scenario.  Will the guy sitting next to you want to continue? Or will he/she say...I have no clue what's going on...don't know  these characters...I'm out!  There needs to be a hook, but not a harpoon to start off.   We do need to get all the other gents on here...certainly more buy in and ideas!!!  I know this is gunna sound stupid...but read Wikipedia's "Story Arc"'s very informative and mentions web comics and regular comics

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