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Triplepocalypse
Tuesday, 26 June 2012
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Posted by frankandjane at 3:57 AM EDT
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Tuesday, 26 June 2012 - 3:08 PM EDT

Name: ducky-denny

Suggestion: Agh, grabby some of a bitch.  OH SHIT, HE GOT ME!

 

In place of: Agh, one of them got me.

Tuesday, 26 June 2012 - 4:39 PM EDT

Name: franktic
Home Page: http://franktic.tripod.com

Agree with Denny,  the dialogue should be polished a bit.  Like:  "the Captain is the main target...once he's ocupied with these zombies...I'll take him out"

Tuesday, 26 June 2012 - 5:46 PM EDT

Name: frankandjane
Home Page: http://frankandjane.tripod.com

Good stuff I like the dialogue improvements 

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