Monday, 25 June 2012 - 10:40 AM EDT

the axe should be lodged into the mast above his severed neck....and a quick action panel above it or a very skinny panel showing the axe flying through the air

Monday, 25 June 2012 - 10:43 AM EDT

There needs to be something to show that they DID get away...perhaps they engaged the secret engine, or they sailed away with enough time to so the dickpunch pitching up on the horizon and then sinking, but by then they were over the horizon to freedom.

Monday, 25 June 2012 - 12:43 PM EDT

Yep. I'm thinking a panel with him swinging then the head on the ground upside down by his leg stump. With a frown on it. 

Monday, 25 June 2012 - 12:48 PM EDT

I had that one panel at the end with wreckage on the horizon and figured that was enough.  Maybe a robot pauses looks at them then  goes back to ripping apart dick punch. 

Monday, 25 June 2012 - 4:31 PM EDT

You still want buzz saws?  What if there were smaller umbilibots (like three feet tall) that was a simple saw bot that started eating away at the hull.  The larger umbilibots attack the humans, and make way for the smaller buzbots to come down and start cutting.  this would take the large arms and saws on the mother ship off (leaving it just a command and control platform)...then that could be how they escape...they blast the mother out of the sky with a cannon/rail gun and the bots all drop dead....but the dickpunch is already too damaged and sinks.

Monday, 25 June 2012 - 6:03 PM EDT

I'm not attached to the buzz saw idea that was just a leftover drawing.  I like the minibot idea.  That whole sequence will be pretty much you between the ships and the bots   I'm not sure about them taking out the mother ship. The robots should be very difficult to kill.  That may be too easy.  Them running away might make more sense.